Death hunts us with many weapons. One that takes our lives; one that pierces our souls; another that daily ages our cells. Often the most painful form of death is that poisoned arrow which enters our heart after an intense relationship. The poem below is actually an excerpt from a much longer poem written by one of profs in college. He asked us to critique it. I took the nine most pertinent lines and handed it back. When he returned my response, he told me it was mine. For many years I called it 'John's Poem', but now it is simply what it is:
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we look for a way out now the whole tree gone to smoke and ash night follows fire unsure pleasures are in it made love or new excuses then pulled its roots on a winter morning her eyes and her breath
thane boden ©1990
I will leave it to the reader to discover what about this poem makes it inspirational in the face of death. Originally, the four-page diatribe was based on the author getting over the relationship, although there was almost a balance of kindness. It was titled, "Slaying the Dragon."
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