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	Friday, July 17, 2009

What Do You Care About?: Presentations About What Matters Wednesday I listed the things I want to do, and one of them was "to become better at conversing, presenting and demonstrating". To that end I've been watching videos of great presenters (like Garr Reynolds and Clay Shirky) and reading articles (like Jay Lehr's Let There Be Stoning for Bad Presenters). A number of truths about good presentations emerge from this: Good presentations move quickly and are polished, showing that they have been well-rehearsed and practiced. This is, after all, unlike writing, a real-time performance art. Good presentations are never read, and are never amplifications of displayed bullet points. What's on the screen enhances and reinforces rather than summarizes what is being said; it is content that cannot be simply said. It is therefore usually graphical, always interesting and readily graspable, and never a distraction from what is being said. Good presentations are dynamic, enthralling, and provocative. It is not enough that they just provide information (that can be done perfectly well using other media). In order to meet these three criteria, you have to invest considerable time, effort, thought and energy into preparing your presentation, and you must be, as the word 'presentation' implies, present. For that to happen you have to really care about your subject and your message. For that reason, at conferences I usually skip presentations made by 'experts', politicians and celebrities, since these are often self-aggrandizing, sloppy, and written by others. One of the exercises I've set for myself is to craft and practice short 'elevator pitches' on subjects where I am attempting to bring about change. They have two overarching objectives: To answer the question in the intended audience's mind "Why should I care about this?"  To be sufficiently memorable that the audience won't be able to get it out of their minds until they've acted upon it, and will be able to re-tell it coherently.  It would be nice if they were also persuasive, imparted new information, and were effective enough that people would remember not only my message but also me, thus enhancing my reputation, but these are much less important. All I really want to do is get them to care about the subject, and pass along their new-found passion to others. Just help them get started, as Patti Digh says. This is the essence of viruses: it's when hundreds and thousands of people start to care about something that they can do something about, that change occurs. The best way to get people to care about something, in my experience, is to show them that you care about it, and why. The key to doing this, in almost every case, is to tell a story. Watch the best TED talks, speeches of change advocates, and even technical talks, and you'll find most of them answer the two questions above by telling a compelling story enthusiastically, memorably and in a way that provokes further conversation and action. My first exercise is to revamp my bio from a story of what I've done to a story about what I care about. First step is to answer the question What do I care about? (that others can do something about). The difficulty I have with this is that most of these things are complex -- they're not easy to explain in an elevator pitch. Some examples: I think our globalized, growth-economy based, oil-dependent, unsustainable, unresilient civilization is going to crash in this century, no matter what we do, and our descendents are going to suffer monstrously when it happens.  I think industrial agriculture (and animal factory farming in particular) is a horrifically cruel and wasteful system that contributes massively to climate change, deforestation, impoverishment of soil and loss of biodiversity. I believe that the greatest challenge we face in this century is finding the right partners to collaborate with, in our personal lives, in enterprise, in political activism and in community. I believe we need to de-school our society, and relearn the process of self-directed learning focused on developing critical knowledge and capacities such as understanding how the world really works, acquiring self-knowledge and self-understanding, learning how to discover what we are meant to do, and learning how to deal with complex issues. When I think about trying to prepare a cogent, concise story that conveys why I believe each of these things, and that imagines some ways we could effectively act on them, I despair. These beliefs are the results of years of thoughtful study, research, discussion and reflection. Am I not, as I keep saying, "too far ahead" of most people to ever hope to find a point of connection with them on these very contentious beliefs? Wouldn't I be better just telling people I believe these things and associating and collaborating with those who are at the same point in their learning and self-discovery journey that I'm at? Maybe, for a start, it's sufficient that when people ask me to say something about myself, who I am or what I do, I reply instead by saying that what I do is driven by the four profound, controversial, considered beliefs above, and that these are the things I really care about. And when I'm asked for my bio, I do the same: Instead of trotting out my work experience and credentials, I tell them that once I learned enough about what is really happening in the world, I had to stop living my comfortable, acquisitive life and start to take action on these four core beliefs. But, beyond that, I'm going to try to write an elevator pitch on each of the four issues above, a pitch that meets the two criteria above, that actually impels my audience to at least consider the validity of these beliefs and to think about how they might act if these beliefs are valid. You'll read these pitches here first, and I'll be looking for you to help me hone them into the core of great presentations. I'd be interested, in the meantime, about what you care about that others might be able to act on, and how you have conveyed your passion for these causes and beliefs effectively to others. Category: Communication & Story-Telling 11:57:07 PM  trackback []  comment []

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