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Friday, October 17, 2003

POEM OF THE DAY

Theodicy (The Mothers)

 

God cannot be, so

he created the mothers.

 

God created the heavens and the earth

without form and void,

 

and God cannot be, so

the mothers brought forth daughters

 

and sons,

but let's talk about daughters.

 

God is three people, and God is one,

and God cannot be, so

the mothers tilled paradise

with their daughters at their knees

and the daughters learned the steps

learned to bend and sway,

learned the songs

for sowing, for threshing,

and for harvest.

 

The boys were out hunting

or fishing or fighting

and thinking up really big lies about it,

because the Lord their God

is a jealous God

and God cannot be, so

 

the mothers kept their daughters close,

and all fingers busy

picking the ripe fruit

from the tree of knowledge

of good and evil.  Take, eat

the mothers say to the daughters, so

you may know what is precious

in our sight.

 

Plenty will be left over for the boys.

 

There is no God but God, and God

the compassionate, the merciful cannot be, so

the women have mercy

and teach it to their girl children

while the men are busy

counting their begats.

 

God from whom all blessings flow

cannot be, so

the mothers carry the daughters' water

to the place all waters flow,

and God himself

needed his mother and sisters

to get there.

 

God is love, and God

in his infinite mercy cannot be, so

the mothers love with a love

stronger than death,

dropping tears of blood

in their daughters' shadows.

 

Dana Pattillo

 

Note:  I have posted this poem before, but not as part of the PoD series. 

I post it today in honor of Fiona, and her Tequila Goddess poem.

PoD 61


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