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Saturday, November 01, 2003

POEM OF THE DAY

Thirteen Ways of Contradicting Wallace Stevens

 

(Read Wallace Steven’s Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird, HERE)

 

            1

Among a billion moving blades of grass

in the wind on the plain

the only still thing

was the eye of the blackbird.

 

            2

My mind was empty

like the gray, dung streaked branches

of a dead tree

which holds an empty blackbird’s nest.

 

            3

The autumn leaves scuttled past a dead blackbird.

It was all of a hymn.

 

            4

A man and a woman

are not.

A man and a woman and a blackbird

did not.

 

            5

I know which to prefer:

The terror

of silent innuendo

just after

the blackbird stops whistling.

 

            6

Blackbirds filled the long window.

The light and warmth of the room

crossed it in a black glitter of eyes.

Hunger

pressed against the glass

shivering in the light.

 

            7

O women of Haddam

look up from your feet!

See how the golden light

of imaginary birds

shines in your men’s eyes,

in their thin faces.

 

            8

I know barbaric accents,

listen for faint slurred rhythms.

I do not know

whether the blackbird is involved

in what I hear.

 

            9

Where the blackbird first flew into sight,

it marked a point, one edge

of an infinite line.

 

            10

At the cry of blackbirds

high in a moonless night

all the psalters of cacophony

would be erased.

 

            11

I carried my canoe

to the mud swirl of an Oklahoma river.

Joy swept me up

when I took

the wind on the water

for blackbirds.

 

            12

The pond is still.

A blackbird is dying.

 

            13

It was a cold light all morning.

The ground was frozen

and the sky was clear.

The last blackbird had flown

out of sight.

 

Dana Pattillo

Note:  I feel a strong but unjustified kinship to Wallace Stevens in the way he goes about his work. The above parody is a slight but sincere tribute to his prosody.

PoD 65


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