Poetry
of Dana Pattillo (He uses Dr. Omed's Patented Oil of Prosody, and you can too!)
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Friday, January 02, 2004

POEM OF THE DAY

 

ALL ERRORS TO REPLACE

 

with Henry and David in Limbo

 

in this dream Henry Miller & I read  a book

of the poetry D. H. Lawrence didn’t have time

to write when he was alive & we’re both

laughing like maniacs watching Lawrence

 

float in Limbo still in his dead wasted

& tubercular body reeling off the lines

like a combined Cosmococcic telegraph

& ticker tape only like gold wire

 

the dream is a small enclosed space Henry

& I stand at ease foot to foot like enlisted men

both holding the book a thick leather bound

old tome both turning the beautifully scribed

 

with our fingers the textured vellum pages

Henry wears a huge rakish hat & a double-breasted

pinstripe suit & is young and a looker

like the picture in the 1975 Rolling Stone interview

 

Henry & I read aloud with difficultly laughing

as I said the dream is a small enclosed space

live gold wires crawl thru everything gold like

fire living like snakes sewing  thru everything

 

like fire in lines but especially thru the book

like the care of a medieval monk illuminating

a manuscript but otherwise over everything

like a child scribbling his drawing of teacher

 

her hair only like snakes & fire & gold wires

to sew the dead into the dream & still

maniacal laughter Henry & I found it

hilarious at the time & now I can’t remember

 

any of what we read so I really can’t say why

 

Dana Pattillo

 

Note: I think I wrote this in December of 1978… or maybe 1980.  I was 20 (or 21) years old.  The title is a line from the poem Errata, by Charles Simic.  Here are the relavant lines:

 

Will there be time left to list

all errors to replace

all hands guns owls plates

all cigars ponds woods and reach

that beer-bottle my greatest mistake

the word I allowed to be written

when I should have shouted

her name

 

(PoD 76)

 


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